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- Subject: Writing II
2024-03-11
- Unit II essays (in week 7 folder in Teams)
- Review the differences between a persuasive and argumentative essay: Writing II_Unit II. Our focus is writing a persuasive essay, where you only need to support one side of the argument.
- Problem statement and thesis statement due today
- Review thesis statement structure (See Thesis Statement And Skeleton Outline.).
- Find articles, websites, etc. (text only) that supports your first topic sentence. Avoid audios and videos as references.
2024-03-12
- Partner up with your writing partner
- Review thesis statement structure
- Draft the first Topic sentence and find evidence (written texts – no audio or video) to support a topic sentence.
- Randomized list of writing partners for today:
- Haston Alejandro Guzmán Rangel & Ana Paula Castañeda Corpus
- Odemariz Vásquez Campos & Kenia Carolina Ruiz Gomez
- Evelyn Alondra Ponce Zamora & Diana Nayomi Cárdenas Arruel
- Andrea Denisse Piña Breceda & Juan Santiago Mercado Ponce
- Paula Itzel Tapia Martinez & Jorge Alejandro Andrade Muñoz
- Gabriela Espinoza & Eduardo Daniel Almanza Huerta
- Camila Alessandra Ochoa Hernández & Danae Itzel Romo Carmona
- Bryan Omar Sánchez Avila & Karen Lizeth Rangel Flores
- Carolina Aguilar Mota & Salma Robles Valdez
- Kendra Linet Espinoza Flores & Jessica Daniela López Argueta
- Aylin Montserrat Zamora Saucedo & Daniela Iveth de Luna Escoto
- Pablo Leonardo Reyes Ortiz & Luis Antonio Castañeda Tiscareño
- Jessica Lizbeth Reséndiz Ortega & Erika Edith Raygoza Saldaña
- Karol Nefertari Martínez De Luna & Yuliann Medina Vieyra
- Fatima Jimenez, Hannia Jocelyn Medina Acosta, & Diana Donaji Sánchez Troncoso
2024-03-13
- Continue working with your writing partners from yesterday (March 12, 2024).
- Remove comments in the Excel spreadsheet after making changes.
- Complete your first body paragraph and submit to the [Teams assignment](View assignment: “First body paragraph”).
- Provide feedback as time permits.
2024-03-14
- Complete columns D-M, which includes adding your second topic sentence to the Excel spreadsheet in Teams.
- Review feedback left to your shared Word document and ask for clarification as needed.
- Work with your writing partners to check each other’s work and to review each other’s feedback.
- Take requests for personal examples of topic sentences.
- Review APA for references and citations.
2024-03-15
- Salma (March 5), Andrea (March 5), Ode (March 6), Fatima (March 11), Diana Sánchez (March 11), Sam (March 11) – Make sure you are making frequent modifications to your shared Word document in Teams and you are reaching out to me if you have questions.
- Review appositives, ME…AL for each body paragraph,
- Appositive: Mike, a baseball player, studies at the University of Aguascalientes.
- Relative clause: Mike who plays baseball studies at the University of Aguascalientes.
- Last day to submit first paragraph assignment in Teams.
- Parallelism
- To demostrate a new alternative for healthy eating without meat, the carnivorous should look for new healthy diet because the benefit to subtitute meat for proteins, chemical reactions in the body, and support from a vegetarian diet.|
- Rewrite:
- To demostrate a new alternative for healthy eating without meat, the carnivorous should look for new healthy diet because the benefit to subtitute meat for proteins, chemical reactions in the body, and support from a vegetarian diet.|
- WC (word choice); CA
- to explain why excessive alcohol ruins the lives of adults and adolescents, alcohol is a drink that you can find very easily, but this drink affects health, family, friends or romantic relationships, causing reckless behavior
- Rewrite:
- to explain why excessive alcohol ruins the lives of adults and adolescents, alcohol is a drink that you can find very easily, but this drink affects health, family, friends or romantic relationships, causing reckless behavior
- Structure and parallelism
- To help students to manage stresfull situations, psichology and lifestyle, the power of the mindfulness and meditation help students because of a better emotional control, connect with spiritualy,and mental peace.
- Rewrite:
- To help students to manage stresfull situations, psichology and lifestyle, the power of the mindfulness and meditation help students because of a better emotional control, connect with spiritualy,and mental peace.
- WC; AGREE; WP
- To convince music-loving public that the ancient music genres are better, music-loving public must understand the meaning of songs because ancient music have power in situations like love relationships, relaxation’s moments and moments with friends.
- Rewrite:
- To convince music-loving public that the ancient music genres are better, music-loving public must understand the meaning of songs because ancient music have power in situations like love relationships, relaxation’s moments and moments with friends.